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Luis Torres
5/9/12
816
Sources: (www.acadv.org/dating.html) (www.ncvn.org) and (www.stayteen.org)
Dating Violence is one of the most not recognized problems in America. If we all knew what dating violence was, we won’t have relationship problems around the world; doing so we can be informed. I would like to speak up to the victims of dating violence where we can inform them how to get help. Not just that but to make sure they’re know when they are being victimized of dating violence; how or what to do if so. If we were all aware of this issue we can make a large change in America.
To begin with, the population of America doesn’t understand what dating violence is or much about it. I wanted to bring out what it really is and how people should get help for what happening. Did you know most common people in American that were victims of dating violence where mostly teens. We want to target those victimized by their partners and to show them that their not alone in the country; show them how to get help. On the other hand, if the victims are not informed about the problem they can end up in two places. Those places are ether the Hospital or the Commentary and we know that if one victim is a young mind who kills themselves or killed because of their partner; we won’t like it. So it’s better to inform the country of this nasty problem that is happening. There is also the aftermath of dating violence where the person who was bumped feels so deep in sorrow where they want to kill themselves, if better to get help is they get thought of suicide.
Continuing, we want the audience to know what’s going on and to take action into their lives. The audience might know someone that might fit into the discriminated field of dating violence because I have known people who have been victimized by their man. People let themselves get abused physically and emotionally because they think they need that “MAN” when they don’t really need them, if the audience notices this they can know the signs of dating violence before it are too late. Put them in your shoes, they may think that having someone to protect them when they are not. So if you have a heart, we want you guy’s the audience to take a stand and help those who need help before it’s too late; go talk to your kids or friends if they know someone with this problem, one less problem more solutions.
Following up, the average American who would be targeted for dating violence would be teen about 14-17; about 68% of teen in America. This leads to more than just damage but murders and more than 7% in 1995 only. So the fact is that more people die from this violence that occurs in a relationship; no its not depression, it is related to what happens but this subject of dating violence is that it come from a man or woman from either side. Dating violence is made up from small thing as an insult to large as a rape or death that happens in a relationship. Usually problems start from a small thing such as an embarrassing this and grow into something nasty that people don’t want; many people don’t move or go away from it because they get assaulted by the dominant. Overall, it important to stop abusing your partner because it will be consider dating violence; even if you didn’t do one thing, it’s making them fell like it.
No just that, corporation help those who are victimized my other because of dating violence help them get back on their feet and to inform them about the rick of dating violence. These corporations are from subjects from emotional damage to physical damage; they help you build yourself confidence and move on in life. For example, these corporations give you steps to follow, making sure you don’t make the same mistake again. Very much they get rid of your old life and build you a new one on top of it; they throw out thing that remind you of it (Him/Her). Over all, they help you become a new person for the better, make you become more informed about your surrounding and what those can do.
Now, we want you guy’s to know what your living, living in a place where these thing happen in plain sight; and people don’t do nothing. Just like Uncle Sam, I want you to take action for something that must of not happen. So what i am saying is just as we know drinking and driving is bad, so is dating violence. Now i hope you understood at least one message i am trying to get thru to you

Luis Torres
816
Ms.Blase
December 23, 2011
A Life in jail is worse than a death sentence
A Life in jail is worse than a death sentence. Manny people who enter jail become different not just physical but mentally too, they will think like if someone is going to kill you. When stuff like this happens your family starts to suffer your pain because they know that you’re gone, even if you get out you’re not the same. Manny time when a person is new and stays in jail for more that 5-10 years they become sexually frustrated and will hunt down for other prisoner who are weak. Would you risk going to jail for something that was not worth it?
To begging with, in jail you can suffer many ways but mostly the people who love you, you can suffer mentally in jail or physically. “Some family members of crime victims may take years or decades to recover from the shock and loss of a loved one. Some may never recover. One of the things that helps hasten this recovery is to achieve some kind of closure. Life in prison just means the criminal is still around to haunt the victim. A death sentence brings finality to a horrible chapter in the lives of these family members.”(Anonymous)(http://www.balancedpolitics.org/death_penalty.htm) As you can see that the family also shatters when they see that someone once special end up in a rode like this because if that was me most of my family will become criminal and I want to show a good example to my family and hopefully I can keep it like that until I die. I now that jail is suppose to change the person that you are but most of the time in never happens because in jail is a different world and you must struggle to make it to the top so you need to do the dirty work to rise up and to take control of the prison
Also, Most of the men who get sexual abuse or raped are usually white and handsome (they do not rape ugly ones). In most stories I hear from movies and books like the movie Ghost Of Mississippi starting James Woods as the person convicted of killing the colored man in the middle if the night 20 year ago.“I'm afraid to be too sexually hungry. If I was, it would be too easy to give-in to masturbation, or even to allow myself to be seduced. It's important to be strong and to be on guard. It's hard enough to be on guard against all the predators who want to degrade me by taking advantage of me sexually. I must also be on guard that I don't humiliate myself or allow myself to be humiliated by my own strong sexual desires.” This here comes from a man who is trying to survive in jail without being rape in jail and is sounds difficult. And it would be hard to be in his shoes at this time (http://www.prisoners.com/rapefear.html) there have been many cases of rape in jail.
Finally, the main point is that, Most of the people in jail miss allot of their family’s life and it does not only change the person inside but also the loved ones in the outside.“My dad was in prison all my life. He always told me he was going to change when he got out (a new man I guess).” (Nacole From www. gangsandkids.com/gquestion2.html#promises) This child grew up without a father and I imagine myself growing up without a male role model to tech me wrong from write and especially knowing that he will never be there in my childhood memories. I know some convicts rob for their family and go to jail for trying to steel food from a grocery and they suffer for that cause that is different from a person who tries to rob and kill for money and reputation, those are the people who should suffer in jail.
In Conclusion, People who make a crime should stay in jail since their family suffer, their bodies suffer, and it changers the person’s personality. They will become a different person from when they stepped in the jail cell. I would rather die than be in jail because it will be like being a colored person living with the KKK witch will end up in being harassed by other people. I know you would be thinking that “I should stay in jail and do good behavior to get out early” but you won’t you will suffer more pain that any regular human can so I would die than suffer. Is it worth going thru?

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